Monday, December 22, 2008

Sub Plots

So, as of right now, I have decided to reveal all, or at least most, of the sub plots in my story. Which I am mostly doing because, my plot summary was very vague and not everyone followed it as well as I'd hoped and because my best friend had made some suggestions for improving the story, that I had actually already done but then cut out, so I'm bringing them back!!! Yay!

So, anyway... Side plots...

-The first would probably be Hiroshi's relationship with Keiran.
-Which starts a hundred some odd years ago (totally random number) with Aiden, Hiro and Kerian all being members of the Imperial Court. And because Kerian is a total jerk and he thinks he owns Hiro, he and Aiden are constantly bashing heads and fighting. Which is alrite, annoying, but alrite, until Aiden slips and Kerian finds out that he and Hiro are together. Then Kerian looses it and starts plotting Aiden's demise in the form of killing the current king's son and framing Aiden for it. Which might have worked. But he never gets the chance to try because the kings next big announcement is that he's chosen Aiden to be his successor (You didn't think Aiden was born royal did you?) instead of his son. Because his son is a rotten brat. Which as you can imagine did not go over to well with either Kerian or the king's son (whose nameless, by the way) so they decide to join forces to get revenge, Kerian with the intent of killing both the king and Aiden and framing the nameless son for it. Sneaky, sneaky. But when the night comes, the son can't kill his sleeping father, cuz he's spineless and Kerian fails to kill Aiden cuz Hiro blew his cover. So because he's pissed, Kerian kills the nameless son, then immedately gets caught by the king's guard. However, before he can be sentenced, the creep escapes. -dramatic music- But after awhile people forget about him. Aiden gets married to Hiro, they have kids, the king steps down and Aiden takes over. A couple years later the previous king is murdered in his house while the Radic family is visiting Hiroshi's brother in Human World, which would have drawn a lot more attention then it did, had they not lost Emma that same night.
*Note: Kerian does not love Hiroshi, he just feels some baizarre need to feel like he owns Hiro.

-Next would be the reason Emma went missing.
-Alrite, first of all The Makai is an alternate reality/parallel demension verizon of Earth and the two worlds are seperated by a void. The void is kinda like space, only more fragile. The void is only disturbed by large bursts of energy. (Like a super powerful demon, etc, etc) And I have decided to justify Aiden and Hiroshi losing Emma, Im gonna have their be a massive disturbance in the void. (Which you must cross to get from world to world.There's no way around it.) The cause of this disturbance is the killing of the old king. Also it takes a phucking lot of energy tostay in the void for any length of time, because I said so....

-Eclipse lied about/put so much time and effort into hiding the fact that he was a dragon.
-Dragon's are decidedly the most powerful type/classification of demon out there. Their also the rare and have a particularly bad reputation for being violent and particularly mean. So I thought it made sense to have the other demon's hate and fear them. And Eclipse learned this early on, so he felt in order to be accepted, he needed to lie. Especially when joining the king's gaurd. I haven't decided yet, but I might make it so that Sabastian is the only one Eclipse ever told. Then Sabastian could help him find the power limitators!!!

There are a couple more, Such as Hiroshi's halfbreed-ness, Emma and Eclipse's secret relationship, and other stuff like that, that I just don't feel like writting about right now.

Sunday, December 21, 2008

Minor Characters

More Profiles! This time for the minor characters in my story.

FRIENDS!!

Nickname: Sir Bashington The Third, Bash, Bastian
Full Name: Sabastian Accardi
Birthday: October 15th
Sign: Libra
Animal: Wolf
Ability: Speed-y-ness
Weapon of choice: Axe
Height: 6'0'
Weight: 147 Pounds
Hair Color: Unkept, Brown
Eye Color: Green
Sexuality: Straight
Clothing Preference: Sabastian just wears his guard uniform most of the time
Other Details: Eclipse's best friend...-cough cough- ...Only Friend. -cough-
Personality: Funny, Loyal, somewhat lazy...
History: Became Eclipse Best/Only friend and Roommate, at around 14-15 and then joined the King's gaurd with him a couple years later.
Favorite Color: Gold
Favorite Food: French fries
Least Favorite Food: No such thing
Likes: Animals of all kinds, junk food and being a goof ball.
Dislikes: Being pulled into the middle of someone else' fight, tan people....sharks....
Talent: Getting into trouble and/or biting off more then he can chew!
Weakness: He constantly thinks he can handle more then he's ready for and he doesn't like to ask for help..ever..



Nickname: Riza, Terri, Jazz
Full Name: Theresa Tetranova
Birthday: July 28th
Sign: Leo
Animal: N/A
Ability: Earth
Weapon of choice: Whip
Height: 5'10'
Weight: 135 Pounds
Hair Color: Dark purplely red
Eye Color: Bright Pink
Sexuality: Pansexual
Clothing Preference: Swishy
Other Details: Sabastian's half black girlfriend! One of Emma's best friends.
Personality: Out there, Daring, Honest, kinda clumsy...
History: Three years younger then her brother Sabastian, Theresa is the youngest member of the imperial court.
Favorite Color: Purple!
Favorite Food: Chocolate
Least Favorite Food: Chicken
Likes: To cook, being ridiculous, sleeping.
Dislikes: Bullies, being patronized!
Talent: She's thinks fast on her feet, she's very smart/witty.
Weakness: She's allergic to bullshyt and has some violent tendencies.


CHILDREN!!

Nickname: N/A
Full Name: Serena Deimos
Birthday: December 1st
Sign: Sagittarius
Animal: Dragon
Ability: Increased Strength
Weapon of choice: Doesn't matter, she can work with just about anything
Height: Still Growing
Weight: Still Growing
Hair Color: Pink with black tips, short and messy
Eye Color: Light blue
Sexuality: Undecided
Clothing Preference: Colorful
Other Details: Emma and Eclipse's first child! Definitely takes after her father....
Personality: Silly, Headstrong, Creative.
History: Born in the castle, kidnapped by Kikyo at age 5.
Favorite Color: Rainbow!
Favorite Food: Chocolate Brownies
Least Favorite Food: Orange juice
Likes: Animals, music, fighting.
Dislikes: Being left out, feeling like shes not good enough.
Talent: Cheering people up.
Weakness: She tries way to hard to impress people, especially her father....


Nickname: N/A
Full Name: Zareck Deimos (It's been decided that Kiritian was to close to Kerian, so we changed it.)
Birthday: May 12th
Sign: Taurus
Animal: N/A
Ability: Medium (Ghost Boy...spooky...)
Weapon of choice: He likes just about everything....except Axes, Staffs and Hammers. They suck.
Height: Still Growing
Weight: Still Growing
Hair Color: Shoulder length, black with one White or Silver streak in it.
Eye Color: Green
Sexuality: Undecided
Clothing Preference: Something comfortable.
Other Details: Emma and Eclipse's second child!
Personality: Interesting, Random, Occasionally spacey.
History: Nothing really interesting, I mean he did miss both the war and the Kikyo incident.
Favorite Color: Orange
Favorite Food: Mac and Cheese
Least Favorite Food: Peppers
Likes: Day Dreaming, staying up late, exploring.
Dislikes: Having to get up early for any reason what-so-ever.
Talent: Being a sneaky bastard
Weakness: Feeling like he has to protect everyone all the time and/or that he has to be strong for his family.

PETS!

Nickname: Vicci, Tori, Puss, Pookie Paws
Full Name: Victoria
Birthday: March 25th
Sign: Aries
Animal: Kitty Cat
Ability: N/A
Weapon of choice: Teeth and Claws
Height: Average size for a cat
Weight: Average size for a cat
Hair Color: Long and Grey
Eye Color: Purple!
Sexuality: She's a cat...
Clothing Preference: She doesn't wear any...
Other Details: The Radic's only pet. She likes Emma the most.
Personality: Lap Cat, Snuggle Slut, Attention Whore, Motor Mouth.
History: Was given to Emma and Angel as a birthday present from Hiroshi's brother, when they were toddlers.
Favorite Color: Pink
Favorite Food: Field Mouse Pudding
Least Favorite Food: Liver
Likes: Sleeping, Cuddling, Chasing things.
Dislikes: Things that require her to be conscious....
Talent: Waking people up in the middle of the night simply because she wants to cuddle or has decided she's hungry
Weakness: Field Mouse Pudding

*I'm debating about whether to make Vicci a talking cat or not. Any thoughts?

Wednesday, December 3, 2008

The Children!!!

Alrite, so as anyone who has read my plot summary knows, Emma and Eclipse are having a baby! (Well actually two, but the second one doesn't come about until later.) First a girl, then a boy, and I have finally decided on names and apperances!! Yay!

Their daughter's name is Serena, and she will have short pink hair with black tips, (Or vice versa.) and light blue eyes. Cuz I think it looks cool!

And as for their son, well he's still alittle nameless. I mean I've narrowed it down to a few choices, I just haven't picked one yet. But anyway, he's gonna have long black hair with white or silver streaks in it. And probably green eyes.

I drew some nice and retarded chibi's of what I want them to look like today, and I think Serena and Nameless Boy No. One, totally look like they could be spawn of Emma and Eclipse. Which is good, I wanted them to look like they could actually be related.

We've also decided, (we being, my alter egos, me and my boyfriend) that since Dragons are a dying breed that we should try to keep the bloodline going, and that Serena should be the one to accomplish that. Yay! (Although I must admit, for awhile there I really did like the idea of her being a butterfly. But then I realized that that would be exceptionally girly of me, so I changed it.) And Nameless Boy No. One, will have to be something else. I'm thinking a psychic or something. Because after the Xander delemia I decided that there shall always be one non-animal type demon in every family....until I run out of good animals to use that is. Then that number will increase. lol.

So.....yea.....BABIES!!!

Friday, November 28, 2008

Family photos!!!

Photobucket
Aiden



Aiden and Hiroshi


Hiroshi


Xander

Krystal


Angel and Krystal


Angel and Emma

Emma

Emma and Eclipse

Eclipse


Damnit Xander...

Alrite, so I just realized that Xander is the only member of the Radic family that doesn't have an animal counterpart/spirit/whatever you want to call it. Which is how I thought I wanted it to be, then I started thinking, maybe he shouldn't be the only one. Now I'm faced with a delima...

If I decide I don't want Xander to be alone, then that means I have to change someone Else's powers. The most logical choice being either Hiro or Aiden. Which I really don't want to do, because both hawks and wolves mate for life, which I thought would be a cute little commentary on their love....not that many people would catch that, but still. And changing Emma or Angel just wouldn't be the same.

If I decide to give Xander an animal however, I have to first come up with an animal, then I'd have to rework the plot line in part two of the story. Which would suck. (If I end up doing this Xander's animal is gonna be something silly...like a platypus or something)

Does anybody think it really matters if Xander's the only one without an animal? Or do you think it would make more sense to change someone Else so he's not alone? (Hiroshi, would probably be the one to get changed.)

Major Plotline Events!

Human World
-Emma gets thrown out of the apartment by her foster father.
-She decides to take a walk before trying to sneak back in.
-Almost hit by a car.
-Eclipse saves her.
-Magically transported to Demon World. -Insert lame magic wand noises here-

Demon World
-Emma freaks out because she has no clue where she is.
-Eclipse somehow convinces her to go with him to meet her parents. (I'm considering instead of Eclipse "convincing" her to go with him, having him knocking her out, but I haven't decided yet. Any thoughts?)
-Next day, Emma wakes up in a strange room, and punches Eclipse in the face because he scared her.
-Family reunion! Emma gets reaquianted with her family. (Yay!)
-Angel and Aiden teach Emma to use her super awesome demon powers! Or try to anyway...she's not very good...
-Sabastian (Eclipse's only friend) gets attacked while on gaurd duty! Ohmigod!!
-Aiden and Eclipse figure out it was Keiran who attacked Sabastian and then immedately freak the hell out.
-Hiroshi also freaks out and wants to send the kids (Angel, Emma, Xander and Krystal) to Human World so they don't get hurt. Good Plan, except..
-The kids want to fight! Especially Emma, even though she's not very good with her powers yet.
-So, what the heck? The kids can stay.
-Using their stealthy ninja skills, Aiden and Hiroshi find out exactly what is going on and why. Seems that Keiran and his army of outcasts have teamed up with Kazuo's gang of thugs and are marchhing on the castle as we speak!!!! Oh no!
-Prepare for war!
-The fighting begins, at dusk, I think. Dawn is so over used, especially in dramatic fight scences.
-And despite they fact that they are waaay out numbered, the royal family and Eclipse's troop of castle gaurds are doing pretty well for themselves, until Emma meets up with Kazuo, who easily kicks her ass.
-Angel interrupts before Kazuo can kill Emma. But since she is wounded (her right arm is numb from blood loss) she doesn't manage to kill him
-Eclipse is on the other side of the battle field when he sees Emma collapse and freaks out, Because he loves her, (I'm stil trying to work this into the plot, but i'm having a little bit of a hard time because it's really not important till the end of the story) and blows his cover, exposing himself as a dragon, which was a secret.
-Eclipse then chases down and over powers Kazuo, killing him.
- Keiran is intrigiued by this, he's never killed a dragon before. So they fight, Keiran wins, because Eclipse has only used his dragon powers like once before, so obviously he can't control them yet.
-Aiden stops Keiran from kiling Eclipse, then slaughters him, extra violiently because he's exceptionally pissed.
-Yay! We won!
-Aiden forgives Eclipse for lying about his origins and they bond.
-After which they remember that Emma is laying in a ditch somewhere dying and they go to help her out!! (Krystal, however, has been with her the whole time)
-Kyrstal manages to save Emma's life, just barely I might add.
-Yay! We all survived! -hugs-
-Then Krystal blurts out that she somehow managed to save Emma's baby too, when someone tells her she did a good job. Nice Going Krys...
-Opps! Emma's face turns white, because she didn't even know she was pregnant, looks at Eclipse.
-Eclipse goes, from Aiden's new best friend, to number one on the hit list. Hiroshi on the other hand is happy for them! Yay, Babies!
-Later on, whether it be the next day or later that same day, doesn't really matter, but the gaurds who have been sent out to get rid of all the dead bodies everywhere, can't seem to find Keiran's body....-insert twilight zone theme-

Tada! That's a rough break down of part one! In part two, you get to meet the baby! (She's so cute!) I welcome constructive critism, especially if you think my story's cliche, you have to tell me!!

Monday, November 24, 2008

Demon World Characters

My Family!

Nickname: N/A
Full name: Aiden Radic
Gender: Male
Birthday: September 9th
Sign: Virgo
Animal: Hawk
Ability: Increased agility
Weapon of choice: Fists or his Sword
Height: 5'8'
Weight: 138 pounds
Hair color: Long-ish, Brown
Eye color: Yellow
Sexuality: Gay
Clothing preferences: Simple, Lightweight
Other details: King of The Makai. (Demon World)
Personality: Intelligent, Protective, Fair.
History: He doesn't like to talk about it.
Favorite color: Royal Blue!
Favorite food: Steak
Least favorite food: Carrots
Likes: Peace and Quiet.
Dislikes: Chaos and Noisy people.
Talent: Kicking Ass.
Weakness: Hiroshi...


Nickname: Hiro
Full Name: Hiroshi Radic
Gender: Male
Birthday: June 20th
Sign: Gemini
Animal: Blood Alchemist (My own version)
Ability: Heightened Sense of awareness, The element of Surprise
Weapon of choice: He doesn't like to fight. But if he must he prefers something along the lines of a spear or staff.....
Height: 6'1'
Weight: 143 pounds
Hair Color: Long, Silver
Eye Color: Green
Sexuality: Gay
Clothing Preference: Long sleeves, Soft
Other Details: Aiden's husband
Personality: Friendly, Witty, Sweet.
History: He doesn't think it's very interesting to talk about one's past
Favorite Color: Purple
Favorite Food: Shushi
Least Favorite Food: N/A
Likes: Roses, Children and Pets.
Dislikes: Anyone who threatens his family.
Talent: Verbal Jousting...
Weakness: His kids.

*Angel, Emma and Xander are Aiden and Hiroshi's children

Nickname: N/A
Full Name: Angel Radic
Birthday: Febuary 29th
Sign: Pisces
Animal: Fox
Ability: Fire
Weapon of choice: Dagger
Height: 5'9'
Weight: 131 pounds
Hair Color: Long, Black
Eye Color: Red
Sexuality: Lesbian
Clothing Preference: Loose, Comfortable
Other Details: Emma's twin sister, Krystal's girlfriend.
Personality: Occasionally Bi-polar, Loyal, Dedicated, Violent.
History: Lived in the castle her whole life
Favorite Color: Red
Favorite Food: Everything except Cucumbers.
Least Favorite Food: Cucumbers.
Likes: Chasing people around the castle, and Training.
Dislikes: Being told she can't.
Talent: She learns very quickly.
Weakness: Krystal, Siblings, Headstrong.


Nickname: Kitty
Full Name: Emma Radic
Birthday: Febuary 29th
Sign: Pisces
Animal: Cat
Ability: Lightning
Weapon of choice: Sai. (But their impractical, so she doesn't use them often.)
Height: 5'6'
Weight: 128 pounds
Hair Color: Shoulder length, Red
Eye Color: Purple
Sexuality: Bi-sexual
Clothing Preference: Cool Looking and Comfortable.
Other Details: Angel's twin sister, She's new to Demon World and she still hasn't gotten the hang of her powers yet. Has a huge crush on Eclipse.
Personality: Energetic, Outgoing, Loud.
History: Lived in Human World for 16 years.
Favorite Color: Purple
Favorite Food: Ice Cream!
Least Favorite Food: Coconuts
Likes: Japanese Music, Dancing and Alice Cooper.
Dislikes: Emo'z.
Talent: Nothing she feels is important...
Weakness: Falls in Love too easily, Hates to see her friends and/or family memebers in pain.


Nickname: N/A
Full Name: Xander Radic
Birthday: December 28th
Sign: Capricorn
Animal: N/A
Ability: Shapeshifter
Weapon of choice: Deception! Haha...or a Staff works too.
Height: 5'7'
Weight: 136 pounds
Hair Color: Short, Unkept, Black with multicoloered pieces mixed in...
Eye Color: Green
Sexuality: Undecided
Clothing Preference: Something that fits.
Other Details: Youngest Radic kid
Personality: Slightly Withdrawn but still Fun. Creative.
History: Has lived in the castle his whole life
Favorite Color: Dark Green
Favorite Food: Crackers.
Least Favorite Food: Fish.
Likes: Watching his sister Train, Drawing Pictures.
Dislikes: Being treated like a "kid", Feeling left out.
Talent: He's very persuasive.
Weakness: Pudding...


Nickname: Krys
Full Name: Krystal McKay
Birthday: Febuary 14th
Sign: Aquarius
Animal: N/A
Ability: Touch-Know
Weapon of choice: She tries to avoid fighting.
Height: 5'0'
Weight: 105 pounds
Hair Color: Long-ish, White-ish Blue
Eye Color: Blue
Sexuality: Bi-sexual
Clothing Preference: Something Light and Flowing.
Other Details: Angel's girlfriend, Resident healer
Personality: Shy at first, then AWESOME!
History: Krystal originally came to the castle to become the healer's apprentice, and that's where she met Angel?!
Favorite Color: Silver
Favorite Food: Milkshakes.
Least Favorite Food: Strawberries.
Likes: Hanging Out, Sleeping In and Being Silly.
Dislikes: Mean People.
Talent: Making people feel better.
Weakness: Trying to help everybody, all the time.



Nickname: N/A
Full Name: Eclipse Deimos
Birthday: July 3rd
Sign: Cancer
Animal: Dragon, but shush! It's a secret...
Ability: Increased Strength
Weapon of choice: Sword
Height: 6'3'
Weight: 160 pounds
Hair Color: Long-ish, Black hair, that fades to purple in the bottom couple of inches.
Eye Color: Dark Blue
Sexuality: Undecided
Clothing Preference: Doesn't matter as long as it fits.
Other Details: Lies to Aiden and Hiroshi about his abilities and past, Captian of the gaurd at the castle. Eventually winds up married to Emma.
Personality: Quiet, Withdrawn, Caring, Somewhat defensive.
History: Don't ask, he won't tell you.
Favorite Color: Black
Favorite Food: Ramen
Least Favorite Food: Brushell Sprouts...
Likes: Being Mysterious.
Dislikes: Nosey people who ask to many questions!....and John Travolta.
Talent: He takes a hit well...
Weakness: He doesn't broadcast his weaknesses...


My Bad Guys

Nickname: N/A
Full Name: Kazuma, Keiran
Birthday: Unknown
Sign: Unknown
Animal: N/A
Ability: Necromancer Extrondanaire
Weapon of choice: It doesn't matter to him...
Height: 6'2'
Weight: 136 pounds
Hair Color: Long and Black
Eye Color: Neon Green
Sexuality: ...
Clothing Preference: Something that has either been stolen from an opponent or makes him feel superior.
Other Details: In his opinion Aiden is unfit to rule The Makai. END. Of. Story.
Personality: Sinister, cruel sense of humour, EVIL!
History: ...
Favorite Color: Blood
Favorite Food: Humans
Least Favorite Food: Sweet things...
Likes: Death, Panic, Destruction, Blood, Fighting...
Dislikes: Aiden, Losing...
Talent: Being the creepiest person you will ever know.
Weakness: He likes to pretend he doesn't have one.


Nickname: N/A
Full Name: Kazuo
Birthday: Unknown
Sign: Unkown
Animal: N/A
Ability: Drains the life force from other demons
Weapon of choice: Scyth
Height: 5'11'
Weight: 120 pounds
Hair Color: Short and Unkept, Brownish
Eye Color: A Dull, and Hazy Grey
Sexuality: Nothing and No One interests him..
Clothing Preference: Doesn't matter
Other Details:
Personality: His mind is very complex, but you wouldn't nessicarily be able to tell that by looking at him. He doesn't talk much, he has no interest in friends, sex or power. He has no emtional connections to anything. He does things purely to see if he can.
History: Nobody really knows anything about his past but it is to be assumed that with an ability like his he had a crappy childhood.
Favorite Color: Grey
Favorite Food: N/A
Least Favorite Food: N/A
Likes: Fighting, testing his limits...
Dislikes: People...
Talent: Unknown
Weakness: He doesn't care if he lives or dies...


Nickname: N/A
Full Name: Kazuma, Kikyo
Birthday: N/A
Sign: N/A
Animal: N/A
Ability: Shadow Manipulation
Weapon of choice: Shadows, she tries to avoid of psychical confrontation.
Height: 5'4'
Weight: 124 pounds
Hair Color: Black, Long-ish
Eye Color: Purple
Sexuality: She is attracted to power.
Clothing Preference: She likes things that make her look both appealing and dangerous at the same time.
Other Details: She is the only daughter of Kazuma, Keiran and she was once engaged to Eclipse. She's also not important until the sequal.
Personality: Twisted, and Vengeful...
History: She focuses only on her future.
Favorite Color: Black
Favorite Food: N/A
Least Favorite Food: N/A
Likes: Eclipse, Irony, Causing pain.
Dislikes: Losing...
Talent: Pissing Emma off
Weakness: Her plans are not always thought all the way through and she's a terrible fist fighter.