Thursday, January 15, 2009

I lied...

HERE YA GO! A brand spankin' new (and hopefully more helpful) outline of my stories plot!!! And just a note, I can't figure out how to fix this weird spacing, so you'll have to deal. LoL

-FOURTEEN YEARS AGO!-
-Angel and Emma have just turned three, and Hiroshi is pregnant with Xander. Aiden and Hiro have decided that the girls are finally strong enough to make the trip to human world, so they go to visit Hiro's family!

-While in the void on their way home their is a HUGE disturbance, (caused by the death of Aiden's father) and everyone gets seperated. Hiro and Angel wind up back in demon world, Emma in Human world (specifically Austraillia....) and Aiden gets lost in the void.

-Aiden almost dies searching for his daughter in the void!


In Human World Fourteen years later...
(repetitive, repetitive.)


-Emma gets into a fight with her foster father and storms out of the house. Thinking she needs to calm down a bit before going back home, Emma starts walking toward her school with her headphones blasting music as loud as possible



-While cutting through the student parking lot Emma nearly gets run over by a big black truck because a couple of stupid college students decided that this would be the perfect place to get drunk and drag race each other.


-Then Eclipse comes flying out of concievably no where to rescue her. After which Emma faints, because of stress, adrenaline, shock...whatever....


-The next day Emma wakes up (completely convinced all the weird-ness of the day before had been a dream I might add...) in a room she's never seen before in her life, freaks out, falls out of bed and when Eclipse comes running in to save her from her evil bed spread she punches him in the face cuz he scared her!
-After which he has to explain things and then try and convience her that he's not a crazy rapist and get her to come and meet her family!!


-Then it's family reunion time! Eclipse takes Emma to meet her family, but before anyone will even introduce themselves to her, Aiden has to determine if Eclipse got the right girl or not. (-tension, tension-) .... And he did! Yay! Suddenly Emma is surrounded by twelve diffrent people all trying to introduce themselves and give her a hug at the same time! Which is alittle ovewhelming...



-Emma has about a month or so to get to know everyone and explore the castle before Aiden and Hiroshi just up and decide to throw a party! To celebrate their daughter's return and make a big deal about promoting Eclipse to "captian of the gaurd". Yea! (A party is also the perfect excuse to introduce all my charries now and get Emma a freind or two. lol)

-Sometime after the party, Emma and Hiroshi (because Aiden, can't do it!) have a heart to heart and discuss exactly what happened the night she disappeared.



-Fast Forward Two Years into The Future!-

-Emma has a relatively good handle on her demonic powers and abilities now, has become best friends with Angel, Tereasa, and Krystal, and still has a huge crush on Eclipse. (Haha.)



- OH MI GACKT! Eclipse's right hand man Sabastian gets jumped while on gaurd duty! Oh no! After making sure Bash gets taken care of Eclipse goes out to check on the rest of his men and make sure no ones missing or anything like that.



-AND THAT! Is when Kerian comes in and declares WAR on his brother, because according to him Aiden is unfit to rule. (He joined forces with about a billion lower class demons and Kazuo's little band of thugs, btw...)



-Xander is standing out in the hallway when Kerian leaves and makes a comment that's half way between spiteful and creepy. Which only confuses poor Xander because not only does he have no clue who that was, he's not exactly sure what he meant by that baizarre comment.



- Aiden immedately calls the memebers of the court together for a war council! Yea! Cause they've got friends and allies, they're not about to fight a war alone! So they gotta see whose with them and who isn't.



-And the kids (Xander, Angel, Emma and Krystal) have no idea whats going on, until after the war council when Hiroshi freaks out and trys to send them away to human world (to stay with their uncle) so that they don't get.



-The only problem is... that that suggestion is met with extreme protest! And the children refuse to leave! Angel and Emma fight particularly hard for their right to stay and defend the castle. (Because they feel strongly about it, I guess.) And eventually Aiden gives in and decides to let them stay dispite the fact that Hiroshi really really really doesn't think it's a good idea.



-Anyway, training, preperation, so on an so forth....PREPARE FOR WAR! (I'm thinking they should have like a month to prepare for this...What do you think?)



-Somewhere in this phase of the story Ima have Eclipse all but admit he's in love with Emma and vow to protect her, because she is still not very good with her powers and he feels like it! Ha!



-And so the fighting begins! (At dusk, I've decided. Because dawn is soooo over used and NOBODY wants to get up that early, not even demons...)



-Dispite the fact that they're greatly out numbered the good guys are holding their own pretty well. Which is mostly because aside from Kerian and Kazuo this army consists of really low level demons.

-That is until Emma somehow gets seperated from Eclipse and the other gaurds designated to protect her and runs into Kazuo! Who, more or less desimates Emma's life.



-THEN! At the same time Angel comes running to save her little sister, Eclipse realizes the love of his life is no longer right there with him, She's being strangled! OH NO! So Angel (who has sustained a few minor injuries at this point) throws a fire ball at Kazuo's head, he drops Emma, then Eclipse, after breaking all but one of his power limitators tackles him to the ground and starts ripping him to shreads....



-Theres a short fight there, then Kazuo dies and Eclipse turns his rage toward Kerian. Which amuses Kerian, not only because he's never managed to actually kill a dragon before, but because he can tell that Eclipse can't fully control his dragon powers. (He's only used them like twice!)



-Which is why Blaise, Vlad and Sabastian take it upon themselves to intervene here, Because if they had let him fight, Kerian would have surely killed him. And Eclipse is not happy about that, at all and winds up causing some damage to his friends in an attempt to get to Kerian.



-Aiden then steps inbetween Kerian and Eclipse, followed shortly after by Hiroshi. Meanwhile, a little ways away from the action Angel, Krystal and Xander are trying to keep Emma from slipping into a freakin' comma. LOL

-Between the two of them Aiden and Hiroshi manage to DOMINATE Kerian's life, and then Aiden delivers the killing blow. (Of course) And thats more or less the end of the fighting. YAY!

-Krystal manages to save Emma's life, (YAY!) everyone's happy. Aiden and Hiro forgive Eclipse for lying to them. And all is well, Then Krystal slips and says something about Emma being pregnant. End of Party. And when asked why she thinks this, Krys replies "because of the hCG in her blood." (Yes, apprently you can detect pregnancy like 10 days after conception with a simple blood test.) And that is more or less proof positive Emma's pregnant, because Krystal is a super docter/healer/whatever.



-OH NO! Emma goes white, looks at Eclipse. Aiden is furious with the dragon. Hiroshi loves babies, so he's happy. Angel can't believe Emma didn't tell her! It's chaos!

-In the end, Emma and Eclipse get married, have a little girl, name her Serena and all is well with the world! UNTIL PART TWO ANYWAY!

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow, sounds good, but you need to go back andread my comments, cuz I had made some mentions of things to you here and there, and I also knowthat we talked in person about some things so I guess I'm confused as the if you wrote this before or after some of those talks. Oh and I have a few questions that i keep forgetting to ask, because I was having problems having the comments I was making actuall stay, so..

what does ability "earth" mean in your description and what does pansexual mean?

you ares till making weird spellings so I think you are maybe doing it on purpose, but you keep using their for there or they are, and gaurd for guard and such.

xXPhuckin_WickedXx said...

Nah. I just can't spell for shyt.

Pansexual means that you love who you love, end of story. Age, race, gender, etc, etc is completely irrelevant. Pansexual is like an all inclusive version of Bisexual.