Hey Guys!
I've got a new evil plan to try and make you care about my blog!
Wanna hear it?
Phase One:
I draw you in with something adorable like...
THESE PUPPIES?!
And then,
Phase Two:
I'll tell you something! Like this,
I'm actually thinking of adding something with David. Just a little scene when Emma comes and tells him that she isn't dead and he can be like, I just want you to know that you can come Home. And she'll be like yeeeaaaaah, I'd rather be elsewhere but I just wanted you to know that I'm happy and not dead or kidnapped. Cause you know even though he's not a great parent and he's not her father, he's just the guy that got stuck with her when her Mom died, doesn't mean that he wouldn't freak out if she never came Home. And it doesn't mean that Emma would let him think that she's dead cause she's a reasonably nice person all that kind of stuff. So, I was thinking about that. But if I don't end up doing a little scene like that then I'll probably make mention of him at her wedding. He won't get any lines or be allowed to give her away or anything, but I'm not entirely opposed to him being allowed to attend. Ya know?
And then it's like,
BAM!
I just tricked you into reading that with a picture of adorable puppies!
SO EVIL!
SO EVIL!
I just manipulated you Sir! Manipulated!
Hahahaha
Good plan right?
Knocked your socks off, didn't it?
Haha
Now if I can only figure out a way to stop people from only looking at the pictures and not reading what I write....
Hmm, I'll work on that.
Hahaha
Anyway, make my day and leave me some sort of relevant feedback!
Thanks.
Bye bye Loves.
4 comments:
This is a very sneaky trick! I like it! And the puppies are adorable~<3
And he should at least get some mention I think. It'd only be right!
Thanks. But that doesn't tell me anything about my idea.
Should she go back and tell him she's not dead or not? Is it okay for him to be at their wedding or shall we not divulge our secret to an outlander such as David?
I require helpful feedback.
And just fyi, I don't think David deserves a mention. I just think that Emma is too nice a person to blow him off completely like that.
To piggyback off what you said in your post, I like the idea of him coming forth and being all "I know I'm not the best parent but I still care about you. And you're welcome to come back home if you'd like" and then his body language can be described as uncomfortable, kinda sad, but caring. And then Emma can go on from there.
I'd write it somewhat like that personally, but i'm not 100% with all your characters personalities so I don't know if he would act like that exactly.
....So, you think that it's a good idea for her to go and see him personally? Alright. That's all I wanted to know, thanks.
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