Baby If I Was Premenstral, You'd Be Dead

Hold on, wait a minute here.

Originally I wrote that they bring Emma straight to the castle to see Aiden and Hiroshi and that was all fine and dandy, but Emma is kind of yucky at this point. She was nearly run over, knocked out, kidnapped, spent the night in a strange bed, stuck on a horse all day long, I'd imagine that she wouldn't be very awe inspiring after all of that. Plus she's wearing, by Zarian standards, really weird clothing. And Eclipse and Sabastian are trying to pass her off as a Princess! Don't you think that they would have cleaned her up a bit at the very least? I feel like they would have. And if they didn't then perhaps the people at the castle would have been like, um no you can't see the King looking like a street rat. I mean come on! If Neil Patrick Harris can kick the fish tank guys out of his magic club cause their not wearing suits I think that the people of Zarius can be like, um bitch you need a bath. Right? Hahaha. I think that it's a good idea considering the time period.

So, I guess the question is, do Eclipse and Sabastian fix her up in town or do the servants in the castle fix her up ahead of time?

If He Gives You a Seven Tonight, I'll Kill Him Myself

Okay. So I was writing a thing just now, the bit in Valken's crypt and I mentioned something about how Kerian would never be buried there because disgrace and banishment and such like that. Which makes sense. Kerian was sent into exile, so by all rights he should die a horrible death and his body should either rot out in the sun forever and get torn apart by animals or he'd be given a pauper's funeral/grave site on the prison island. However, now I'm thinking Aiden loves his Brother. So maybe after Aiden kills him, he could order someone to collect the body and bring it to the family crypt. Which would mean that in the second book Adrienne would have to break into the crypt to collect Kerian's body. Which is fine. But originally, I was planning on having Aiden send someone to collect Kerian's body and having them not be able to find it. And if I stick with that idea, then probably what will happen is after we realize why Kerian went nuts in the first place and kill him a second time around, then he will finally be allowed into the family crypt.

Honestly, I think that they're both pretty believable for the time period. So, what do you guys think? Does Kerian get into the crypt at the end of this book or does his body vanish and he gets into the crypt at the end of the next book?